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  • christoff_rdgz

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    Sounds like my kind of stuff! If there’s anyone looking up for a writer to team up with, just drop me a line 🙂

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    Howdy!

    Sorry for the late response.

    Thank you very much for your feedback, I’ll try out a new draft taking into consideration your suggestion. Next time I hope I’ll post it in he right place.

    Cheers!

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    Hello again A.A.

    I hope that everything is alright.

    Well, at the very end, I wrote the first script too… So, I can deliver both drafts right now. Wichever is liked the most, will be the the right one.

    Cheers,

    -Christoff

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    Hello A.A.

    That sounds awesome! I already have an 8 page draft, but for a space jailbreak story. I could send it to you via email, so you can take a look at it and let me know what you think. I could, eventually, script this other story too… in the case you like this one more than the space jailbreak’s.

    Now, regarding the art school in Buenos Aires… Well, I’m native in Spanish so if I can be of any assistance regarding translations or whatever, count with me!

    Cheers!

  • christoff_rdgz

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    Hello A.A.

    Holy cow! What a dummy.!

    Yeah, indeed I mixed both… I took the Flash Fiction Stories as the previous step for the Comic Stories, both as parts of The 8 Page Challenge.

    When you mentioned the 1.000 words, since I chose Option #1 on the Flash Fiction, I thought the pages plotting shouldn’t exceed that count… 😅

    Many thanks for clarifiy this for me.

    Cheers!

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    Hello A.A.

    I’m sorry I took me so long to asnwer you about this, but here it is. I managed to outline it in less than a half of those 1.000 words 😀

    Let me know what do you think, when possible.

    Cheers!


    OUTLINE


    Page One

    At one of the biggest cosmic arenas in the universe a massive concert has just ended, but the audience is asking for more. At the dressing room the members of the band are relaxing while their leader switch on the TV to check on the news to see if the specialized media, Other-Worldly Channel, says something about their performance.

    Page Two

    On the TV a reporter is interviewing Ethos Principal about this new super event that’s going to take place very soon at The Time Inn. He briefly reveals his ambitious plan to relaunch this iconic place, mentioning the different joint ventures and partnerships he is counting with.

    Page Three

    Suddenly, the band manager breaks in the dressing room and starts to scream. Even though, the concert was great, The Turmoil Pliers are not selling enough records to afford their expense train anymore and they desperate need some MK campaign to bring in new audiences. Their leader, Heatproof Helmet might have an idea.

    Page Four

    Heatproof suggest they should be part of this upcoming stelar event at The Time Inn, but before he can go further with his idea, the band manager stops him arguing that it is impossible for them to take part of such an exclusive event. Furthermore, the event is taking place at the other side of the cosmos.

    Page Five

    Stubborn about his idea, Heatproof convinces his band to sneak into the concert premises and steal a spot during the rehearsals. It is a risky but doable plan, especially because the band has nothing to lose. The bills stack of bills hasn’t stop to grow and they are in a quite desperate position.

    Page Six

    The Turmoil Pliers need to cross several sites in the universe first, at the time the concert is taking place, but they know they might have a chance if they can get to the place before the third day of concert, so they start the long trip. They keep an eye over the series of concerts by checking on the Numina Kids posts and that’s how they know Reverberate Flaps opened the festival.

    Page Seven

    On the third day, some unexpected issues are communicated to Mr. Principal, after two days of non-stop concerts, many of the artists are in non-condition to perform due to the countless excesses and party. This is something Ethos never thought off and he needs a last-minute solution. Just when the audience can’t stand more wait, something incredible happen.

    Page Eight

    Making their way to the scenario as they were a rugby team, Heatproof and his mates made the scenario their own and starts rocking the place down. Delighted by this unexpected turn of events, Ethos gives instructions to security for allowing The Turmoil Pliers to perform. At the very same time, he receives a business card out of a sudden by the band manager.

  • christoff_rdgz

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    Hello A.A.

    Thanks for your kind words! Well, yeah, I was thinking about going into -Heatproof- head and his little plan to crash the festival, as an starting point, ha-ha! ⚡🎸⚡

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