Works in progress
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Works in progress
Posted by philipspace on July 6, 2022 at 11:18 pmI know everybody has different things going on, but I thought it might be good to have a board running for works in progress.
I’d love to see what other people have going on right now as well. Post your stuff, make it happen, Feedback is an essential part of the process. Critiques are welcome, but keep them constructive please.
philipspace replied 1 week, 4 days ago 2 Members · 4 Replies -
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Nice work Philip. I think the art in the panels works well. The sound effects in panel 1 are a bit distracting in their layout. Not sure what the solution is or if it’s just me.
I also really like your use of values in panel 2.
Cheers!
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Thanks for the feedback Andy!
I can probably scale down some of the effects to give them better flow. They may be just a bit jumbled now that you mention it.
Maybe one less “P-Kow”, too 😉
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