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    P1- Iggy and Miguel stumbling around a dark, creepy abandoned bar. P2- We see Iggy doing a ritual. Gets sucked into a portal P3- splashpage. We see Iggy floating in a dark space by himself. P4- gatekeeper entity yells at Iggy for screwing around with time. He is told he has five minutes. If he goes over, Iggy's mind will belong to the gatekeeper. P5- Iggy gets spit out into the past crashing into his younger self. They both crash into a bar/pub neon sign. Young Iggy suggests a fight to prove who the other dude really is. P6- FIGHT. P7- Fight conclusion. Before Iggy disappears like how Batman does to Gordon, he says "Put all your money into Bitcoin. ALL. OF. IT." P8- Miguel thinks the story is bullshit. Iggy shrugs. We see the creepy, abandoned bar they're investigating is the Time Inn. Last panel will be on the past/young Iggy looking at the broken bar sign he crashed into. It reads "Time Inn".
    I'm really thinking about what <a class='bp-suggestions-mention' href='https://create.comicbookschool.com/members/redheadeded/' rel='nofollow'>@redheadeded said about putting too many characters in the story. But I can't escape that i might really need Miguel to be the "Robin"/ "Dr. John Watson" of the story: the person that represents the audience. So I have someone to explain wtf is going on. I just don't know if i could fit everything i'm thinking about in each page. But that's why we have thumbnailing for, right?

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