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ST ContinuInn Thumbnailsredheadeded updated 3 months, 2 weeks ago 2 Members · 2 Posts
MemberApril 11, 2021 at 11:02 am20 Forum Points
Hello there !
Here is the SpaceTime ContinuInn storyboard (link to the script there https://create.comicbookschool.com/forums/topic/space-time-continuinn-script/)
It still have things that will be changed to better suit the mood of the story at the detailed sketching phase/penciling. For instance, a much less flamboyant introduction pose will be done for the hero in the first page.
The aspect ratio is off from the 16″/11″ final goal, it will be adapted at the penciling. I discovered it just before page 4, so it’s why you see the three first pages with this squarish ratio i’m more used to.
ModeratorApril 23, 2021 at 1:23 am
Hey <a class=’bp-suggestions-mention’ href=’https://create.comicbookschool.com/members/bauldeury/’ rel=’nofollow’>@Bauldeury
Thanks for posting! I really like the way you have the action panels cut into each other diagonally, it really brings a sense of speed and movement to each ‘shot’. Also the expressions (even in this quick layout) really help sell the story.
I am looking forward to seeing your roughs, and how much detail you will put in the background to add the depth of field and push the blocking and placement of the characters as the fights progress. Really Great work here!
D Alley, the Redheadeded
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