• New Idea: Lost Inn Thought

  • jholder12

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    February 25, 2021 at 7:06 am
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    Sevrine, an elder, more mature without being old princess, retires to a mystical land. Just outside it, is an old, dilapidated, haunted inn. The princess is self-centered, lost in her own problems and bemoaning a shattered marriage. However, she also holds power, which is tested against by an inn that is haunted by a vengeful spirit.

    Throughout the story, and down through months, Sevrine and the spirit test their wills against one another, trying to overcome each other’s stubbornness. Eventually, they come to an accord, as they each try to find a way to heal the inn, and maybe themselves.

  • redheadeded

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    March 1, 2021 at 10:40 am
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    Hey @jholder12 ,

    This is a very interesting premise. I am interested to know why a princess and not a queen or a duchess etc. Also are there multiple spirits or just one? How will the Time element work into the story?

    I am so excited this one is very different than a lot of the other Time Inn stories I have seen so far, can’t wait to see what you make with it. 🙂

    D Alley, the Redheadeded

  • jholder12

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    March 2, 2021 at 7:11 am
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    Hi @redheadeded ,

    So what I think I am getting at here is the healing power of time. Sevrine did not get what she thought she wanted from her marriage, and is now lashing out. But In the face of obstinance, she is forced to reconcile her own thoughts, and try and reconsider her own failings.

  • redheadeded

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    March 4, 2021 at 3:14 am
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    Cool, I am looking forward to seeing how you frame this and her thought, and how they change with time. 🙂

    D Alley, the Redheadeded

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