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  • evan-scale

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    April 23, 2021 at 6:27 am
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    Here are the rough pencils for Lost Inn Repose
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  • philipspace

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    April 25, 2021 at 10:27 pm
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    Dang. Looking really good thus far!

    The only remark I would give pertains to the sword poking out of the panel on page 6. You might want to scale that back a hair so it doesn’t get clipped from the edge of the page. Also I would suggest “smoothing” the corners of the edge leading to the point. Otherwise great layout, great composition, and I’m looking forward to seeing more!

  • XanderXero

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    April 27, 2021 at 2:19 am
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    this looks awesome

  • evan-scale

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    April 28, 2021 at 5:51 pm
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    Thank you @philipspace and @XanderXero
    Yes, the corners of the edge will be smoothed in the next step.
    Good point! I will certainly work on keeping the sword in the page, thanks!!

  • jojabarker

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    Great work! I honestly can’t add and/or critique because it’s evident through the tightness of your lines that you have a clear vision. One of my favorite panels is the window frame (if I interpreted that correctly?!) playing a duel role! I’m big on meta, so I look forward to seeing if there’s more of it I’m missing at this stage in the process. Kirbyspeed, my friend! ~Joel

    • evan-scale

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      Thanks!!
      Not sure which panel you mean. I have one that is of the Inn’s door (page 7). But maybe you are talking about the first panel on page 2 (where part of the bottom and sides of the frame are the wooden beams and steps of the Inn). Hopefully, I will make this a bit clearer in the tight pencils stage.

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