Forums Forums 8-Page Challenge #1 for NYCC 2020 (COMPLETED) #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting

  • zach

    Member
    May 7, 2020 at 7:17 pm
    Council-21: Council of the Willing - 2021

    Hi all. The 8 page breakdown I was thinking for the Bron-the-Lucky script.

    Page 1 – Establishing shot of approaching the cursed monastery by ship. Use captions to explain set up.
    Page 2 – Introduce Bron and Mad Baron characters, as well as Bron’s Chance Pendant
    Page 3 – Enter the Monastery, meet the Monks, they question the Baron appearing alone
    Page 4 – Baron explains gambit, the Monks assent, Bron is accepted as a sacrifice instead
    Page 5 – Bron, lead to the altar, trips over a catch in the carpet and knocks a candelabra over. carpet and curtains catch fire.
    Page 6 – The Cursed Monks turn into Monsters and attack The Baron and Bron. Bron resists, and the Mad Baron flee
    Page 7 – The Mad Baron attempt to escape. Bron and the Baron struggle Bron knocks the Baron back, burning rafters collapse on the Baron killing him.
    Page 8 – Bron scrambles back to the ship and sets off, the glowing embers of the burning monastery in the background.