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@philipspace Thank you for the feedback. I think I am going to try a draft starting with him at the window.
I think you misunderstand my intentions with the fight scene. The idea is not to compress that fight. If I do anything to it, I’m deleting it and replacing it with something else. Right now, I think p1 is a better place to cut, and that compressing the action on p7-8 into one page.
