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  • teamwood

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    April 19, 2020 at 9:37 pm
    Council-21: Council of the Willing - 2021

    Series Title: Ultra Max
    Story Title: Double Turn
    Setting: Prison Cell, Prison Visitation Room

    Page One: Lee Franklin arrives outside of the prison kingpin’s cell. He is shook down by a couple of goons.
    Page Two: Lee meets the kingpin, where he receives the threat to propel him to take part in a drug heist.
    Page Three: Lee sits at visitation where he is leaned on hard by the kingpin’s men and we see the mark he is meant to rob, Bug-Eye.
    Page Four: Bug-Eye makes his way to the restroom to hide the drugs he is slipped. Lee follows closely.
    Page Five: Turns out they were not drugs, but his costume. He starts a brawl with Lee.
    Page Six: The two fight and Bug-Eye reveals he set up the whole ordeal. Lee is having trouble fighting Bug-Eye because Bug-Eye can fly
    Page Seven: Down and out Lee finds a smuggled in pen.
    Page Eight: Lee is able to trick shot the pen into Bug-Eye’s wings. Taking down Bug-Eye long enough that the guards can subdue him.