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  • rakeemnelson

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    April 18, 2020 at 2:31 am
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    @Sathem, I look at the plot summary and I have a better understanding of your story so disregard my previous comments. My only comment is that you really need to hammer home a reason why this vampire feels a connection with the main character. This way her being spared doesn’t feel cheap.