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  • rakeemnelson

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    @Sathem, I love the idea of the massacre at the end, but can you clarify if this is the initial crew. If so, I hope you provide some foreshadowing if it was the Grunts or the Boffers who started the conflict. Maybe the man’s monologue saves her from the same fate.

    @AndresBriano, your story is hilarious. My only comment is to watch out for overstuffing a page with the backstory and possibly have the artist throw in some oversize ordinary objects in the background to foreshadow the ending but not give it away.

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