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  • toddmatthy

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    April 17, 2020 at 2:04 am
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    @zammap Thank you for your feedback. I really like the story about the super powered boy and the baseball team. I think it’s relevant today because apparently there are kids getting thrown out of little league for being “too good.” An idea for the ending could be that he meets a soldier or boxer who teaches him to “throw his punches” or hold back so he can enjoy the little things in life.