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  • philipspace

    April 16, 2020 at 10:46 pm
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    @Samuel Barber: Much of this sounds like it would lend itself well to visual interpretation, but your description seems a bit disjointed, like the who/what/where/and how are being given in the wrong order. Since the reader doesn’t know anything about your characters or their motivation, I feel like I’m getting context after the action. Again, you’ve got some striking visuals that you’re describing, and I’m interested to see how it’s elaborated, this a bit confusing to read at this point. Do you have anyone for the art?

    @ Jarrod Elvin; The words “MickMacks’ Meatbucket MegaBabes” caught my attention immediately, and kept hold of it through the sentence “The ‘Meatbucket MegaBabes’ are a group of female cartoon pinup models/interdimensional mercaneries/saleswomen.” I can’t wait to see this, if only for that.
    If I were at the comic store, I guarantee that I would not be able to walk past this title without picking it up.