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ModeratorJune 7, 2021 at 1:06 am
@jojabarker I love the second illustration concept. The idea and the framing are perfect.
For the first, I think you’re going for a collage of all the time periods. I think that could work, but I wouldn’t worry about hitting every single one, especially if that creates more work.
If it’s easier for you, you could focus on a single scene, one of the time period rooms that you want to draw, or something with the locket?
If the ambiguity of the story is still bothering you, a locket with the son in military uniform, for example, with “In Memoriam” could answer that question without tying you to a specific date or time period.
I do like the collage idea too, if you’d rather go with that.