ModeratorJune 7, 2021 at 12:20 am
Thank you for the feedback. The only thing I think the reader needs to know about the son is that he’s dead, young. The how isn’t that important to me. The idea is that the rooms are not just decorated as the various time periods, but they are actually portholes into the time periods. If that didn’t come through, I probably have to bring out the speculative elements a bit more.