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  • rakeemnelson

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    April 16, 2020 at 9:07 pm
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    plot: In this noir-like tale, a young detective is given the case of her elementary school career when a client goes to her with proof of the lunchtime bandit

    Page 1: Susie wakes up and finds herself tied to a chair
    Page 2: Flashback, Susie is cleaning her office
    Page 3: Vanessa and Henry walk into Susie’s office
    Page 4: Susie is investigating serval leads
    Page 5: Present, Henry walks out of the shadows
    Page 6: Henry explains his plan
    Page 7: Teacher discovers the kids in the darkroom
    last page: upon returning to her office, Susie finds that it’s raided. a small hair bow is on the floor.