ModeratorJune 5, 2021 at 11:18 am
Excellent @krisburgos, my friend — I’m indebted to your honesty!
I hadn’t considered that I leaned into the shock more than the character. I’m glad that you and @thesurrealari grabbed onto the push for more backstory/flashback(s).
Definitely drawn to challenging myself to keeping it under 600 words, so gonna see if I can incorporate you and Ari’s suggestions while achieving that goal! ~Kirbyspeed