• jojabarker

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    June 5, 2021 at 11:13 am
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    Double, positive whammy @thesurrealari, my friend!

    I like that suggestion of weaving more backstory/flashback(s). Maybe, in order to not lose momentum I work it so that there’s a gradual transition rather than 1st half vs 2nd…?

    And yeah, I’m glad you brought that to my attention early (because quite honestly, I’m rereading it and still having a hard time catching — the pricelessness of an editor!)

    Again, I greatly appreciate the feedback ~Kirbyspeed