• thesurrealari

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    May 24, 2021 at 8:18 pm
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    James,

    This is really cool. You deal with a lot of interesting and important concepts here. If you are looking for places to cut words, I don’t think you need the explanation that he is going to meet his younger self. For me, it’s implied in the story.

    I definitely see the Gaiman influence, so good job there.