May 19, 2021 at 3:18 am
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    Very chilling story. I’ve already got something in my mind’s eye for this.

    We probably need to talk colors and tone, but I think I have an idea.

    I’m picturing some sort of cabin by the lake imagery with some beat up docks and heavy shadows.

    I’m imagining a lone figure on the dock, looking around and spooked.

    However, in the reflections on the lake, we see shadowy figures approaching him. I’m also thinking that the main character either does not have a reflection on the water, or his reflection is almost crouching, as if it’s about to jump out at the water to snatch him up.

    Thoughts? @jojabarker