MemberApril 25, 2021 at 10:27 pm
Dang. Looking really good thus far!
The only remark I would give pertains to the sword poking out of the panel on page 6. You might want to scale that back a hair so it doesn’t get clipped from the edge of the page. Also I would suggest “smoothing” the corners of the edge leading to the point. Otherwise great layout, great composition, and I’m looking forward to seeing more!