MemberApril 12, 2020 at 9:10 pm
I like the high Fantasy tavern setting. The question that seems to be begged is if Kei is, from a visual standpoint, completely androgynous or is there some kind of gender identifier? Is Kei’s pronoun an essential detail in your story, or is it simply important to you that it be established? It’s your story of course, it just seemed unusual to me that it be included as a specific in your synopsis.
I’m kind of imagining Hana in the final panel with her arm around the waist of an otherwise indistinct, roguish cloaked figure at this point. I’m interested to see how the visual for this turns out.