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Dude, you might be a little late to the party, but I like this story. Iggy seems like a fun fighting type of guy, I like that both characters in the beginning have unique personailities.

There are some writers still here on the fourms that are looking for artist to work with so I strongly suggest you team up the first time in, but with that said.. if you wanted to move forward with this story.. I'm very interested to see where it goes.

Two points of constructive critism..

How much of the 'set up' your first three paragraphs there is necessary? Keep in mind this is only 8 pages and a cover, so be aware of trying to give the reader too much information all at once, KISS always (keep it simple stupid) it's a pharse I have been told a LOT in my creative career and it can help cull down things when needed.
2. What is the more important character interaction Iggy and Miguel? Iggy and the gatekeeper? or Iggy and young Iggy? if you have too many character interactions it might be hard to follow, not impossible but something to take a look at in the early stages.

Good Luck and and thanks for posting! Check out some of the other peoples works and keep commenting, you are doing great.

D Alley, the Redheadeded.

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