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MemberApril 9, 2021 at 5:00 am20 Forum PointsCBS Forum Member: Forum Acolyte
Hey Jarrod, this was really fun! I’m not sure I like the 4th wall break, personally. I like the meta quality of the story without needing you to call it out.
One other little thing, on Page 4, Panel 1: I don’t understand Concierge’s Dialogue here. I think it’s a joke but I’m missing it.
Looking forward to seeing this come to life.