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  • Dave

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    April 9, 2021 at 5:00 am
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    Hey Jarrod, this was really fun! I’m not sure I like the 4th wall break, personally. I like the meta quality of the story without needing you to call it out.

    One other little thing, on Page 4, Panel 1: I don’t understand Concierge’s Dialogue here. I think it’s a joke but I’m missing it.


    Looking forward to seeing this come to life.

    Dave