• thesurrealari

    April 8, 2021 at 9:59 pm
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    I agree with @krisburgos that I’d like to see a bit more character development, some device that connects the character with the ancestor. Being that the first part is a dream, and that dreams are, traditionally, venues for symbolism/subconscious, you could put in some visual symbols that are reflected in the setting of the room. So, you could have the photos like Kris suggested, or (and?) you could have some symbolic elements during the dream–which might not even have a clear meaning until after the character wakes up.