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  • ASAP

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    April 7, 2021 at 8:27 pm
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    Regarding “Time Inn”, I was chatting with Ari last night and came up with an interesting idea to bookend the story with a tavern called “Time Inn”, so that the Survivor starts his journey at the tavern, and the story ends with an Admiral or General receiving the message while at a tavern called “Time Inn” as if it were a franchise in this world.

    If that doesn’t work, I kind of have another story in my back pocket where a guy checks into a hotel (Time Inn), grows old living in the hotel, and ends up working as the front desk clerk where he checks in his younger self, closing the loop.

    @jojabarker + @redheadeded What do you think?