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I really enjoy this concept that someone is moving at a different pace in time, but I always wondered why people didn't have an intervention and it bugs me. For me, its logic; where's the wife? And how come she doesn't step up and say "what the heck is going on??" Also, what's the state of the son at the end? All the script says is that he just says "thanks for making the time", but is he legit thanking her for showing up? Or is he disappointed? I think if the son does more of a shaming of the mom, it will definitely be a more deserved ending. She's been abusing something to allow her to live "extra" life but she needs to realize that despite her experiences, she spent it away from her family and it should crush her. I think you guys have a killer opportunity to really make a statement on addiction and how it can negatively impact a life, but I'm not sure if that's what you were going for. On a side note, reading this reminded me of a great sci fi book I read when I was a kid, I think it was called Singularity by William Sleator. I'm a little fuzzy on the exact details, so don't quote me on any of this, but it's about twins who inherit their uncle's estate and they find a shed in the back that whenever they go into it, time passes faster inside than it does outside and they use it to their advantage.

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