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    @jojabarker ,
    Thanks for the feedback, I am hoping for more of a cosmic reality check than a goofy literal shrinking of the hotel.. more like "the Nothing" from Neverending story.. it's epic in a way that he made it to the end of the universe, but because he lost his chance to experiance living in it in any real sense, it should be bittersweet. Experiancing just this one event in exchange for his life time of experiances and his family's happiness... Mounmental but only for a moment, kinda thing..
    Is there a way you think I could write this to get that across better? Looking for any suggestions as I'm not the greatest at written word.
    Thanks Jo! D Alley, the Redheadeded

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