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ModeratorMarch 29, 2021 at 6:38 am
Hey man this is really coming together! I like how you show how and why she feels the need to use the Time Inn, and that her age is developed over time, I’m interested to see if the woman at the desk changes too? or if she is concerned?
I love the open ending. This is gonna be great!
Thanks for posting,
D Alley, the Redheadeded