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    Hey @jholder12 , I really like this story, and everything comes across clear and well thought through. I especially like the bit at the end where they throw the man out and begin to compliment each other, I'm with Dave though, 30 years no bathroom breaks? only one of them is dead right? so maybe a panel or two of them licking their wounds and glaring at each other could help.. but I love that it takes sooo long for them to realize the other is a friend.

    Curious, are you going to call out the "Time Inn" as the prompt in any way in the comic? or just the conceptual reference to the two women spending so much time at this Inn. ???

    Also spa day? -really? - seems a bit cliche to me, is there any other way to imply women can take care of them selves and each other without "having a spa day"... just my 2 cents, Looking forward to seeing how this comes together.. Thanks for posting!
    D Alley, the Redheadeded

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