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  • redheadeded

    March 10, 2021 at 1:13 am
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    Hey @rakeemnelson ,

    Thanks for the feed back, I have right now that the Dad is more looking for adventure and is distracked in the Inn for the majority of the evening.. then he realizes in the morning that the family is gone, he has spent the time he had allotted and he runs to the desk because there is no more time.

    So I don’t want the reader to know he loses the time.

    Thanks for the interest,

    D Alley, the Redheadeded