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Ya I was trying to keep things a little on the shorter side following the first stage prompt.

1) Dad doesn't really figure it out until the last cycle. Kind of noticing that the clock is flashing the same time or something like that, combined with having the same work conversation each day.
2) The Son doesn't have control, it's all in the clock. Like when the power goes out on a clock and it flashes time, this one is just stuck on that time.
3) Ya they go in the 'morning' to eat and it is the dinner buffet again. I guess everything around them just operates like it's 6pm all the time. The main point is the dad is not paying enough attention to notice that things aren't changing. The son notices pretty quick, but hopes that it will make his dad change.
4) after they have their confrontation, dad fixes the clock and ends the cycle and they start the weekend they were supposed to have without work distractions.

But ya I planned on fleshing out the details in the next steps of the outlining process and whatnot.

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