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  • Dave

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    March 2, 2021 at 8:36 am
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    Great vibe to this D, excited to see it fleshed out in script form.

    I really liked the Shining/horror movie vibe of it all. The Night Manager seems very creepy and wise all at once. My one criticism is I’m not sure how the universe ending fits in here. That felt divorced from Rip Van Winkle thing you were going for. Maybe it fits better when fleshed out?

    With some great visuals, this could be really special.

    Dave