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Thanks D! Oh yes, the monster they defeat at the start is definitely the one the Concierge unleashes in the middle. Although I'd like that to be not so obvious at first, so maybe it will start small and grow in size or transform leading up to the end.
And yes, the Meatbucket MegaBabes will use the artifact to escape the hotel maze - in a climactic (and hopefully satisfying) ending - but the monster comes out with them and they all wind up in the same scenario as at the start.

I'm thinking of having the last dialogue balloon of the comic saying "Phew! I think we lost it" as they are exiting the hotel, and the first dialogue balloons of the comic, when they are in open space, will say "What?" - "I said, I think we lost it" - "Oh no we didn't!!" for example, when the monster appears (again, for the first time). I don't really want them to break the loop, however on subsequent readings I'd like the readers to be able to see smaller details that may not have made sense at first, and how the loop might be broken if the characters were to do a specific thing differently. Like it's teetering on the edge of being broken if only ____. (Sorry - again - if there are multiples of this reply. It seems to disappear when I edit it, so I will stop doing that)

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