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  • redheadeded

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    February 22, 2021 at 11:26 pm
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    @jarrod-elvin This is awesome!

    I love the idea that the comic itself is in a time loop, have you thought that the monster that they defeat at the begining is the monster the the Concierge releases? and it escapes the hotel which (after they defeat it again) is why the have to come back to the hotel in the first place? third place, tenth place? I’m not sure if you’d want them to fix the loop, but good luck in writting it, this is gonna be great!!!

    Thanks,

    D Alley, the Redheadeded