ModeratorFebruary 21, 2021 at 3:01 am
This is a good start@Polygeekism , I take it this is a Groundhog day sitcuation, I have a couple question that may help you define the story a little bit..
1. Does the Dad know it’s the same day?
2. Does the son have control that it’s the same day?
3. Are they eating pizza at the Friday morning buffet but it’s 6:12pm? (that part was a little confusing?) or are they always reliving only Friday Night?
4. Is there a conclusion or just an ongoing cycle in this 8 pages?
Looking forward to seeing this develop, sounds like it’s going to be heart felt and amazing.
D Alley, the Redheadeded