MemberAugust 22, 2020 at 12:47 am
@Philip – Red circles are exactly that! I keep noticing things but forget to address them, so I started just circling them as I see to remind myself to get to it. It’s getting to the point where I need to call it “done” to flat, but there’s just a few more points I need to sand down before I put a bow on it.
Also thanks! I really appreciate that. I realize it’s definitely overstuffed for an 8 pager, but I kinda wanted to challenge myself to go as big as possible just to experiment. I’ve been reading a lotof Silver Age books lately and it just bowls me over how much story and world building they fit into 20 pages. I’m happy with the outcome, flawed as it is. Hopefully colors can help flesh out what’s happening even further. 🙂