• philipspace

    June 7, 2020 at 12:37 am
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    @krisburgos The tentacle monster (?) was not quite what I was expecting from your initial description. Do the monsters attacking the village come in different varieties? Is it more of a collection of nightmares? I know mystery is a big part of this story, but I figured I would ask.
    Blocking out the blacks definitely helps establish the mood for this. I feel like the action on page 2 should be cut down to fewer frames with varying camera angles, giving your artist the ability to show different aspects of the scene without a big reveal. At the very least I would recommend establishing the door on the last panel of 2 that gets opened at the beginning of page 3, even if it’s just the POV characters hand on the door-handle.