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  • andresbriano

    May 18, 2020 at 7:44 pm
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    Hey @Toddmatthy,
    Thanks for volunteering a critique. Your time is appreciated.
    I have just read Respect, BTW. I think it’s well paced and that it has the right amount of story for 8 pages. There’s some specific wrestling terminology that I did not get, but aside from that, I wouldn’t change anything.