• jarrod-elvin

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    May 18, 2020 at 8:31 am
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    @toddmatthy Thank you so much! I will edit this accordingly.
    I did get another piece of feedback suggesting I should have the girls (main characters) speak some dialogue sooner, because as it is they don’t have any dialogue themselves until page 3.