Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting

Jarrod Elvin

@Todd Matthy Thanks! I’m glad you like it! And thanks for reading it and for your feedback!
Yes, that is a good point. I got caught up writing a full script with dialogue that explains a lot of the details. However, for the Revised Plot step I just included the panel descriptions. I tried to amend them so they would make sense without the dialogue, but I guess I didn’t do that well enough.
Anyway, the source of the virus is the Virus God and the Virus Dimension itself. The Virus God goes on to explain how they are one and the same singular entity that exist as a quantum singularity outside of time, space and reality. (Part of the universal source code, if you will)
My characters overcome the virus by stopping it leaking out of the Virus Dimension, by blocking the dimensional rift with their biohazard suits.

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