Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting

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jholder12
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Hi Everyone, here is the plot for my tale “Camriddeon and the Leighman Lurkers.

  1. Establishing the town, Cam, and Pall, the boy.
  2. Play with the boy while discussing the Lurker
  3. Moving out into the woods to deal with the Lurker
  4. The new Lurker
    a. In the background, a piece of the real Lurker is shown.
  5. Camriddeon destroys the beast
  6. Cheering on the hero, the boy follows Cam back down the woods.
  7. Cam and the Lurker talk with each other, and the Lurker fades away.
  8. Last conversation with the boy, before disappearing.
    Hope you enjoy.
    Jack
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