Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting


Specifically to @zanmap ‘s comments on my story idea, I want to use information on page 1 to hint at “whats at stake” to make the scene matter, and I also want to include dialog on the final splash page for “why we should care that he gets out” As zanmap noted, this is a serial story thats part of a large ongoing narrative, so I was imagining it something like an old cowboy serial, or the old batman strips where you drop in just when action is about to happen, the action happens, and then you are left for what the next challenge is/continuation of the story.

your comments were well received .. i’m thinking about how to do this in the frame of what I want to accomplish in the 8 pages.

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