Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting

Kyle Rose

@toddmatthy Thanks for the feedback. I’m glad you got the twilight zone vibe, that’s exactly what I was going for! I need to think about your suggestion a bit. To clarify when you say “past and future” Abigail, do you mean the 5 min difference or the 100-year difference?

Thanks for your feedback. It is fast very fast-paced. I’m thinking the framing elements are going to be only a few pages and most of it will be in the future, but I may have to trim some of the middle a bit and imply things happen “off-panel”.

Also, @thesurrealari I’d love to hear your feedback as well.

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