Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting

#464
Todd Matthy
Participant

@zammap Thank you for your feedback. I really like the story about the super powered boy and the baseball team. I think it’s relevant today because apparently there are kids getting thrown out of little league for being “too good.” An idea for the ending could be that he meets a soldier or boxer who teaches him to “throw his punches” or hold back so he can enjoy the little things in life.

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