Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 2 – Feedback + Plotting

#453
Rakeem Nelson
Participant

plot: In this noir-like tale, a young detective is given the case of her elementary school career when a client goes to her with proof of the lunchtime bandit

Page 1: Susie wakes up and finds herself tied to a chair
Page 2: Flashback, Susie is cleaning her office
Page 3: Vanessa and Henry walk into Susie’s office
Page 4: Susie is investigating serval leads
Page 5: Present, Henry walks out of the shadows
Page 6: Henry explains his plan
Page 7: Teacher discovers the kids in the darkroom
last page: upon returning to her office, Susie finds that it’s raided. a small hair bow is on the floor.

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