Reply To: #8PgChallenge – STEP 11 – Lettering

Jarrod Elvin

@philipspace great work! Your story is a fun ride! I’d like to read more and learn more of the story and characters! I really dig your art style, especially with the cool angles you use (The panel with the key in the lock I think is especially cool and I’d like to incorporate more angles like that into my own work) One thing I would fix up is that ‘forest’ is spelled with only one R, you have it in there twice with two Rs. I don’t mean to sound rude or disrespectful, but I feel that it is more of a courtesy to point that out to you.
@K S You have created a really cool and dark dystopian atmosphere in your work! Really great! The story moves forward and you can really feel the tension and looming threat.
@maryamsmarksers Very interesting and fun character designs and story elements! I can’t wait to see the whole thing and find out more! Fantastic!

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