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  • philipspace

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    Understood @Bolu. Overall your visuals are very, very strong. I hadn’t noticed the motion blur on page 3, but it’s not as pronounced there, whereas page 6 it’s in the foreground.
    I think this would be a case of “less is more”. Your protagonists pose is strong, the composition is excellent, you precisely convey that he’s aiming without the need for a motion-blur. I think if you merely edit so that his gun is charging, sans motion line, the panel will have a stronger impact overall.